Young gun

That was one amazing reading. Original or not,the theme and its execution was just brilliant.A few incidents of forced rhyme may have arisen but that really is no stain on ...

This was something truly enjoyable. Like everyone must have pointed out before,your presentation skills of situation is definitely beyond ordinary writers.Describing normal situation and not loosing t

I think this story was quite effective. Leaving it here or using it as some prologue is up to no way should this seem incomplete.Plot really is no big issue.Its ...

Serious Gold star stuff. Really simple stuff was never put down so effectively before. The part where he rejects the two girls who ask him out,his feelings at her place,the ...

The brilliance: At one point in your life you must come you a cross road that determines your future. A situation where you are stuck between the safe bet and ...

This was quite interesting to read. The meaning towards the end requires some emotional thinking and is not easy to figure out unless you could identify with it, or, if ...

So, the narrator wants everyone to explore their talents and not go along with the crowd? Here is what could make your poem complete: Struggle of a person who stands ...

The theme reminds me of something like life is like a moving car on a straight road with no reverse gear . You really do need to make the ocean ...

This poem was about normal people who need to be somebody else to get attention because nobody listens to them,[if I got this write]. Whenever you do write such a ...

I don't care about understanding this or reviewing this.Its way too hilarious. Funny lines But I picked myself up off the ground Out of sheer will to do a poo ...

Hey....I've never seen such a unique and creative idea before. You really showed what pain happiness can bring while the whole world just craves to be in that state forever.You ...

Plus points: Amazing use of psychology. Interesting display of how the narrator changes his/her mind. Parts of the poem catch deep attention of the reader. This might help you improvise ...

This might help a little: Free style writing is good,but many parts of your poem sounded like you were writing prose. You are not establishing links good enough from one ...

Since people rarely write on such topics, I thought I should review this. head lolling hands bloody napalm-colored eyes These lines lack structure and flow.Rearrange them to get a rhythm. ...

This one looked liked it had come out straight from a funeral sight. All the emotions that surface after a person dies was brought out very accurately. This dreadful event ...